The Room 8 team!



Ben, James, Connor, Marshall, Lusilah, Lisa, Abbey, Kasey, Eric, Indya, Darcy, Lucas, Jack, Kalani, Libby, Liam, Jordy, Emily, Francesca, Zoliekah, Hayley, Tayla, Jack F, Travis, Naomi and Mrs Hunter!







Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Using desciptive vocabulary in our writing.

We have been creating and using vocabulary banks.  We have been using a thesaurus to find 'better', more decriptive words for our writing like .........nice.....sad.....said.... good......went.....

We have been changing short/boring sentences and making them interesting and exciting.  Here are some examples......

I am really happy today.
LUCAS changed this to....
I am really glad, amused and thrilled today.

NAOMI changed this to....
I am so jubilant and contented today. 

TAYLA changed this to.....
I am overjoyed and delighted.

I am quite sad
LIAM changed this to.....
I feel quite heartbroken and gloomy...

BEN changed this to......
I am quite depressed and a bit tearful.


Mrs Hunter said 'Good morning'
JAMES changed this to......
'Good morning', Mrs Hunter announced with a bright tone ringing through her voice.

'Can I look at the book?'
LUSILAH changed this to....
Can I examine the book?

FRANCESCA used words like....joyful....delighted...answered....exclaimed...wonderful....elated...


CHECK OUT THESE LINKS.......they have GREAT games on them....ALL ABOUT ADJECTIVES

http://www.funenglishgames.com/grammargames/verbnounadjective.html

http://www.ngfl-cymru.org.uk/vtc/ngfl/english/monmouthshire/choose_adj_monmouthshire.html

http://www.childrensuniversity.manchester.ac.uk/interactives/literacy/wordclasses/adjectives.asp



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